Miscellanea for short-story lovers

Spirited: “Leap Books has summoned some big names in fiction to help put together 13 ghostly stories to support a good cause, with all proceeds to be donated to 826 National. 826 offers free after-school tutoring, workshops, and in-school programs because they believe that ‘strong writing skills are fundamental to future success.'”

From the Daily Telegraph: Over 20 unpublished stories by Anthony Burgess discovered in archive – “A collection of unpublished stories and scripts written by A Clockwork   Orange’s Anthony Burgess have been found in the author’s archives.”

A Year of Flash: May 2010 – May 2011: “If you’re new to our site, what you will find is the result of a year’s worth of creative labor and love — on the part of 176 artists and authors who contributed over 1,500 flashes, poems and art.”

The Redwing’s Nest: “The Redwing’s Nest is looking for art and writing from children, pre-school through 8th grade, from around the world.”

4 Ways to Make Every Word Count: “Getting the full value out of every word you write is especially important when it comes to the short story. The key is to recognize the power of a single well-chosen word, and trust it to do its work. As a rule, the more economically you use language, the more powerfully you will deliver your message. Here are four techniques to help you make each word count.”

A Flat Nose Leads To Better Writing

I’m thrilled to have the following guest post by YA author S. G. Rogers. She tackles the painful subject of rejection with tips on how to get through it and ultimately improve your writing.

In her former lives, S.G. Rogers was a lawyer and an actress, but she’s now grown up and settled down as an author.  Drawn to fantasy literature, she’s lived in some of the most magical places in America, including La Jolla, California, Asheville, North Carolina, and currently Savannah, Georgia.  She resides with her son, husband, and two hairless cats—which look and act quite a bit like dragons.  When she’s not writing, she enjoys practicing martial arts.  You can find S.G. Rogers at http://childofyden.wordpress.com/ and Twitter: @suzannegrogers. And be sure to check out her new YA fantasy, The Last Great Wizard of Yden .

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Man, it hurts to be rejected as a writer.

When that golden door slams in your face, your nose gets squished to one side and your lower lip begins to tremble.   Then you go off into a corner, lick your wounds and wonder if you ever had any talent whatsoever.

I heard someone once talk about what makes a good salesperson.  The axiom was that a ‘no’ is only a request for more information.  I’m not a good salesperson, but my writing has improved from that advice.

If you truly believe you’ve got a good story, even though it may have been rejected for publication somewhere, approach it like a salesperson.  Make it better and submit it to another publication. Easy to say, than to do I grant you.  I’ve often had what I felt was a spanking great story rejected without explanation.  It made me mad.

But you know what they say – don’t get mad, get even.  Prove to the world that you’re a good writer.  After the pain ebbs a little, go back to the story and figure out how to improve it.

The most common reasons I was rejected were the following:  the story took too long to get going (no sense of change or tension), my concept was clichéd (ouch), the reader didn’t care about my characters, my points of view were wobbly, I was engaged in too much telling and not showing, and finally…my story didn’t have the right feel or wasn’t the right fit for the publication.

There’s no excuse for not learning the technical craft of writing (ie: good grammar, spelling, etc.).  But after that, the best piece of advice I can give to aspiring authors is to join a weekly critique group.  Be prepared to read a few pages from your work-in-progress and listen to the feedback with an open mind.  This feedback will help you determine what does or doesn’t work.  Some criticisms will be more valuable than others and sometimes you do have to consider the source.  But this weekly ‘trial by fire’ will thicken your skin like nothing else.

I’ve gone back to a manuscript and reworked the beginning to make it more compelling.  I’ve added details to characters to make the reader care (hint: Teflon-coated protagonists just don’t do the trick).  Instead of writing that my main character feels bad about something, I write that she swallowed hard and averted her eyes to hide the tears stinging the backs of her lids.  I try to MAKE you care enough to keep reading. Remember, your writing is only precious to you…until you draw someone else into the story long enough to become emotionally invested in the outcome.

Don’t quit.  Keep writing.  Remember, your next rejection is just a request for more information.  Pretty soon, the rejections will come fewer and fewer.  And when you get your first acceptance, go outside and yell, “Hello, World!  I knocked the door down with my nose!”

~  S.G. Rogers

Drollerie Press Closes and Other News

I have some sad news to share: Drollerie Press–home to mythic fiction–is closing up shop. Read about it here.

And other bits and pieces from the writing world:

Literary Journal Submissions 101 – “To submit your latest short story, essay or poem, you’ll need a cover letter—which is much different from a query. Use these tips from inside a creative writing program to help your letter make the grade.”

How to Let Plot Guide Your Short Story – “The short story is the art of abbreviation. We aren’t dealing with the panorama of life as we might be in a novel. We’re focused. If the novel is the art of the gaze, the short story is the art of the glance. The short story’s illumination must be sudden and should suggest an ongoing life, not present it in full. A short story must immediately pull the reader out of her world and drop her into the world of the story. There’s little time for setup. We begin when everything but the action is over—at the edge of the cliff.”

Kids’Magination Magazine Submission Guidelines – “Kids’Magination Magazine, where kids can enjoy learning and reading, is open for submissions of short stories, flash and microfiction. We want stories suitable for 9 to 14 year-olds – stories that will excite the reader found in all kids, of all ages, youth and adult.”

Pongo Teen Writing –  “The Pongo Teen Writing Project is a volunteer, nonprofit program for teens who are on the streets, in jail, or in other ways leading difficult lives. We love to help young people express themselves through poetry, especially teens who have never written before. (And we want to share our teaching techniques with caring adults.”

And the winner is…

Laurie Carlson has won the Literary Giveaway Blog Hop, and she’ll soon be curling up with a copy of Janet Heller’s Traffic Stop. Congratulations to Laurie and welcome to all the new subscribers. Please let me know if you ever have any market news to share or publications you’d like to promote.

Literary Giveaway Blog Hop: Oct. 15-19

Winner chooses: Janet Heller’s Traffic Stop or How the Moon Regained Her Shape. (Check out my interview with Janet from earlier this week.)

Giveaway details: 1.) leave a comment, along with your email address, on this post by October 19  OR 2.) subscribe to Word Crushes by October 19 (current subscribers are automatically entered). A winner will be chosen at random with the help of Random.org.  And be sure to visit the other Literary Giveaway blogs:

  1. Leeswammes
  2. Devouring Texts
  3. The Book Whisperer
  4. Seaside Book Nook
  5. The Scarlet Letter (US only)
  6. Rikki’s Teleidoscope
  7. Bibliosue
  8. Curled Up With a Good Book and a Cup of Tea
  9. The Book Diva’s Reads
  10. Gaskella
  11. Lucybird’s Book Blog
  12. Kim’s Bookish Place
  13. The Book Garden
  14. Under My Apple Tree
  15. Helen Smith
  16. Sam Still Reading
  17. Nishita’s Rants and Raves
  18. Ephemeral Digest
  19. Bookworm with a View
  20. The Parrish Lantern
  21. Dolce Bellezza
  22. Lena Sledge Blog
  23. Book Clutter
  24. I Am A Reader, Not A Writer (US only)
  25. The Blue Bookcase
  26. Book Journey (US only)
  27. The House of the Seven Tails (US only)
  28. In One Eye, Out the Other (US only)
  29. Read, Write & Live
  30. Fresh Ink Books
  1. Living, Learning, and Loving Life (US only)
  2. Bibliophile By the Sea
  3. Laurie Here Reading & Writing Reviews
  4. Amy’s Book World (US only)
  5. Teadevotee
  6. Joy’s Book Blog
  7. Word Crushes (US only)
  8. Thinking About Loud!
  9. Kinna Reads
  10. Sweeping Me
  11. Minding Spot (US only)
  12. Babies, Books, and Signs (US only)
  13. Lisa Beth Darling
  14. Tony’s Reading List
  15. SusieBookworm (US only)
  16. Tell Me A Story
  17. Close Encounters with the Night Kind
  18. Nerfreader
  19. Mevrouw Kinderboek (Netherlands, Belgium)
  20. Boekblogger (Netherlands)
  21. In Spring it is the Dawn
  22. No Page Left Behind
  23. Elle Lit

Dancing with Words: Interview with Poet Janet Ruth Heller

Janet Ruth Heller’s writings range from poetry to essays to picture books to criticism, yet regardless of the format it all contains one thing in common: an ear for the musicality of words, the ability to make a sentence dance and sing.

A teacher at Western Michigan University, Janet has earned numerous awards, as will, I’m sure, her most recent publication, Traffic Stop–a collection of poems with themes encompassing nature to nontraditional women.

In the following interview Janet discusses how poetry can influence all types of writing, some of her favorite poets, and her plans for the future.

And be sure to check back this Saturday when Traffic Stop or Janet’s picture book How the Moon Regained Her Shape (winner chooses) will be given away as part of the Literary Giveaway Blog Hog.

I once took a fiction workshop from the author Lance Olsen who recommended that we all read at least one poem a day. He said our writing would improve by trying to emulate the cadence and feel of poetry. What are your thoughts on that idea?

I believe that writers cannot do their best work in a vacuum: all writers need to read both good authors of the past and good authors of the present. Reading poetry is one way to learn about different rhythms, images, structures, and patterns of sound.  My mother read me many good poems when I was a child, and these got me interested in poetry. Studying music is another way to gain knowledge of rhythm, structure, and repeated sounds. I took piano lessons for eleven years and have sung in choirs and as a soloist since I was a young child. This exposure to music has shaped my poetry and my prose. I wrote my book for children about bullying, How the Moon Regained Her Shape (Sylvan Dell, 2006), in musical prose-poetry.

Who are some of your favorite poets and why?

My favorite poets are British writers S. T. Coleridge, W. B. Yeats, Charlotte Smith, Dylan Thomas, Gerard Manley Hopkins, William Shakespeare, Seamus Heaney, Robert Burns, William Wordsworth, Robert Browning, Elizabeth Barrett Browning; American writers Alicia Suskin Ostriker, Adrienne Rich, Judith Minty, Lisel Mueller, Hart Crane, Alice Friman, Marge Piercy, Elizabeth Bishop, Jim Daniels, Edna St. Vincent Millay, T. S. Eliot, Maxine Kumin, Gwendolyn Brooks, Alberto Ríos, Bruce Guernsey, Mong-Lan; Israeli writers Chaim Nachman Bialik, Yehudah Amichai, Rachel Bluwstein, Chaim Guri, Leah Goldberg; and Hispanic writers Sor Juana, San Juan de la Cruz, Federico García Lorca, Rubén Darío, Antonio Machado, Jorge Guillén, Pedro Salinas, and Dámaso Alonso.

I like writers who have striking images, careful structures, lyrical use of sounds, and profound ideas. I like to read poets from other countries to get a broader perspective.

How has writing poetry influenced and/or improved your other writing?

Writing poetry has helped me to be more rhythmic and more concise when I write prose.  In high school, I learned about haiku poems and began writing them. This format has taught me to avoid wordiness. Working on poems has also spurred me to use more imagery in my prose.

As the founder of the literary journal Primavera, you were one of the first editors to publish work by Louse Erdrich. I think she’s a perfect example of a novelist/short-story writer whose prose reads like poetry. What other writers do you think have the same touch? What do you think it is about their writing that has the feel of poetry?

Poetic writers of prose use many images (similes, metaphors, etc.) and demonstrate sophisticated rhythms. Great playwrights, novelists, and memoirists adapt the dialects of real speakers but make the language more lyrical. I consider the dramas and stories of Anton Chekhov, William Congreve, Athol Fugard, Oscar Wilde, and Tennessee Williams very poetic. The fiction of Edith Wharton, Nathaniel Hawthorne, George Eliot, Madeleine L’Engle, Virginia Woolf, Katherine Patterson, D. H. Lawrence, Myla Goldberg, Jaimy Gordon, and P. D. James is also very poetic. I find the essays of Charles Lamb, the memoirs of Frank McCourt, and the dramas and memoir of Dylan Thomas very poetic. Of course, many of these authors also wrote/write poetry.

What are you working on next?

I’m writing a memoir, revising more manuscripts for children’s books, revising one-act plays, and revising a book of poems based on characters and events in the Bible.

Is there anything else you’d like to add about the connection between writing poetry and writing prose?

The line between poetry and prose changes over the centuries and is not always clear.  For example, William Wordsworth and S. T. Coleridge wrote “conversation poems” in the 1790s that were radical because these two writers used more informal language and more prose-like rhythms than traditional poets did. Today, we are very comfortable with the British Romantic poetry that seemed so radical when Lyrical Ballads was published in 1798. Walt Whitman broke away completely from meter in Leaves of Grass (1855), using repetition and parallelism to create new poetic rhythms. In the twenty-first century, authors are experimenting by writing prose-poetry and using nonfiction writing in the middle of poems.

Hunger Mountain 2012 Submission Calls and Ebook Publishers

Calling all YA writers: check out Bethany’s blog posting for an update on Hunger Mountain’s writing needs – “Jan-March 2012: The Mystery & Magic of Identity – Hunger Mountain is actively seeking submissions for the Winter 2012 issue The Mystery and Magic of Identity.” Click here for all the info.

And I just came across Books to Go, an ebook publisher of short stories (YA and older, all genres). More and more electronic publishers are moving into the short story world, so I plan to put together a list of these publishers for Word Crushes soon. Stay tuned.

Getting Started: Navigating the world of short stories

(The following is a guest post from Madeleine Swann, who joins Word Crushes from England. It you click on her name, you’ll see that Maddie and I share the same taste in WordPress themes. Great minds think alike? -Erin)

I’m a fairly new writer. I’ve had some articles and short stories published but I’ve still got a long way to go and I appreciate how hard it is to get started. Perhaps this sounds as though I should live in a commune but I really think it’s important for writers, especially other new and confused ones, to share what they’ve learned, so this is for you. Join my wild ride!

When I send off short stories I can spend a very long time looking through endless lists of magazines and websites that publish them, and one place I go to is The Short Story . A few of the publications are no longer with us but enough are, and there are sections full of advice and competitions as well. Some people may disagree with this but I’m quite dubious of anything asking for entry money so I tend to avoid those. Plus I have no money. Don’t forget of course to purchase The Writer’s and Artist’s Yearbook, it’s invaluable.

Set up a website and join social networking. Most people already have, but if you haven’t I can’t tell you how useful I’ve found it. Through Facebook I started talking to a comic publisher, and now I’ve got a horror story coming out with them at the end of the year. If you have a website it can make you look so much more professional (or alternative, whichever your preferred aesthetic). I made a couple of comedy adverts for my site and put them on youtube, mostly to amuse myself but also to let people see my personality, which is hugely important. Just remember, if you put a photo of yourself on your homepage make sure you don’t look insane, unless that’s your intention.

I’ve heard this so many times I need to say it just to be sure you all know too: conflict needs to be set up for your character fairly early on. Beautiful description is great but readers appreciate it more when they’re dying to find out what happens. I always try to make sure the opening line of everything I write has a huge impact, even in a small way; people decide whether to continue reading at all based on those first few words.

I’m not a fan of how-to books at all but I found How NOT to Write a Novel by Sandra Newman and Howard Mittelmark very useful and very funny. At first I was embarrassed at reading all my mistakes laid bare, but once you get over the initial cringe it’s full of great tips, and the principals mostly work for short stories too. I tend to get a coke in a pub to do research because I need noise to think – I know, weirdo – and I was laughing out loud. People were looking.

I always think getting involved with local things is a great idea. We have an arts festival in Essex and I’m doing three different performances. Sometimes you might have to be pushy and I know it doesn’t suit everyone, but you really never know who’ll see you or who you’ll get talking to. If you make a fool of yourself, it’ll at least be a memory you and your friends can laugh about.

Lastly, have other people read your stuff. Maybe even read it aloud to people – people who won’t just say ‘that’s good.’ You need to grit your teeth and let it be read by someone you know is honest. There are tons of online workshops, so join a free one. I personally use Critique Circle.

So here we are; my thoughts on getting started in writing. Hopefully you’ve found it dizzyingly informative, but if you have any helpful suggestions for me I’d really like to hear them because sharing is the way of caring. Or something.

Wait… There’s more: a few useful links:

http://newpages.com/literary-magazines/
http://www.pw.org/literary_magazines?apage=*
http://andromeda.rutgers.edu/~lcrew/pbonline.html
http://www.duotrope.com/listallmarkets.aspx
http://litlist.net/online_journals
http://www.litmags.org/list.php

Teen Voices: Where young writers speak though print

I was thrilled when Sarah Binning, Marketing Coordinator for Teen Voices, emailed me, saying that Word Crushes had caught her attention. She wondered if I would be willing to help spread the word about Teen Voices. And, of course, I’d be happy to. So here’s the scoop:

Teen Voices is an intensive journalism mentoring and leadership development program for teen girls in Boston whose mission is to support and educate teen girls to amplify their voices and create social change through media.

2011 marked its 20th year of print publication. To commemorate this achievement, the cover of the Spring/Summer issue featured twenty faces of readers and teen editors of Teen Voices to showcase the diversity of readers. Additionally, it held a “20 under 20” short story competition for teen girls (check out the winners here).

Through the Teen Voices program, girls create an internationally distributed print and online alternative magazine reaching 45,000 readers worldwide and receiving more than 200,000 annual page-views from 175 countries. And it remains the only alternative magazine by and for teen girls in the nation.

Ezine weaves tapestry of excellent writing: Interview with YARN editor

 “‘I want to be abducted by aliens,’ Attison said as he shoveled a spoonful of tuna into his mouth.” From:  Swamp Monster Bonanza By Michele Tallarita

“The 7-11 is empty, so I count the hairs on the third finger of my left hand.” From: Stubb  By Arthur Slade

“Any minute Ms. Morris will call the girls up on stage.  The cattle call.” From: In the Spotlight by Emily S. Deibel

Whew! Does it get any better than that? First lines that pull you in, making the computer screen disappear until all you see is a story unfolding word by word. Yet, this is exactly what I’ve come to expect from YARN–an online magazine packed with essays, poems, and fiction for teens. And YARN never fails to deliver.

In the following intervew, YA Consultant and Reader Lourdes Keochgerien discusses how YARN got its start, types of stories she is looking for, and what to expect in the future:

What inspired YARN? How did it get its start?  

Back in the winter of 2008, Kerri Majors, co-editor, started writing a short story for young adults. After a little online research, she discovered how few venues exist for such writing. That story became a novel, so she didn’t wind up needing a YA literary journal, but ever since then, she’s wanted to start a journal that featured YA writing. After talking about it on-and-off with writer friends like Shannon, co-founder/co-editor of YARN, Kerri decided it was time to make the dream a reality in the summer of 2009.

What do you look for in a story? Are there any specific types of stories or plots that you wish writers would send you?

The story should be for a teen audience and honestly portray situations this audience can relate to, without losing their respect along the way. It’s also important that the story ring true, reel us in from the first words, and keep our interest from sentence to sentence. There is no one way to do this, of course, and we want stories that are as quirky and unique as possible. And people say writing YA is easy!

Believe it or not, despite the popularity of sci-fi, fantasy, and steampunk in YA novels, we don’t see many short stories in those genres.

Why would you pass on a story?

We’ve passed on stories for many reasons: sometimes it was because they were more for a children’s or adult audience, and sometimes it was because the story wasn’t well enough thought out, and still other times it was because, well, it just didn’t float our boat. This is a very subjective process, and because we’re all writers ourselves, we know how frustrating it can be. The important thing for writers to remember is to keep working on their craft, and keep sending out their work.

What do you enjoy the most about editing YARN?

All the editors can agree that one of the most wonderful things about editing YARN is discovering new talent, adult and teen, and helping those writers shape their stories into publishable work. We are very hands-on editors, willing to work with a writer who has promise. With teen writers especially, it’s exciting to see exuberance in their prose. The love they have for reading and writing will live on for a very long time.

Who are some of your favorite authors and why?

There are so many wonderful YA writers today, it is difficult to narrow the list down to a few. All the authors that we have had the opportunity to interview and publish can be found on our favorites list including: Barry Lyga, Malinda Lo, Pete Hautman, Allen Zadoff, Arthur Slade, Mitali Perkins, and Tina Ferraro just to name a few. Each author offers such an unique prespective on adolescence with heart, humor, and honestly.

Anything new coming to YARN this year?

Well, we don’t want to give away all our secrets, but we can tell you that we will have new short stories by Kody Keplinger and John M. Cusick, an interview with Gail Giles, new editors’ blogs, and of course, new publications from the brightest new fiction, non-fiction, and poetry writers in YA.