Characters: Making Them Memorable and Likable

Creating characters is always a challenge so I’m thrilled to have a guest post from author Marcy Blesy with hints on how to develop unforgettable characters. Marcy is the author of Prom for One  (young adult novella), Confessions of a Corn Kid (middle grade novel), and Am I Like My Daddy? (picture book).

I have been writing children’s books (picture book to young adult) for several years now. I always ask “beta readers” to review various stages of my manuscripts along the way to make sure I am on target with what I am intending to convey through the story. One young adult historical fiction manuscript I wrote (unpublished) elicited responses like this with early drafts:

“Your main character is not likable.”

“She’s too needy. Make her stronger.”

And a middle grade contemporary novel brought these responses:

“I don’t like your main character.”

“She’s thinks too highly of herself.”

After the sting went away, for much of myself often finds itself in the description of the main character (I can’t help it!), I set to work tearing into the manuscripts to make the reader love my main characters as much as I did. I thought about them all the time. They became part of my daily life. Who couldn’t like them?  Check out the response to the YA historical fiction manuscript from an editor after my final draft:

“This was a story filled with sweet and likable characters in a time period that was very believable.”

Here is one of many positive reviews I have received from the middle grade contemporary novel (now published on Amazon as Confessions of a Corn Kid).

“…She’s a truly lovable character and I believe middle grade readers will easily relate to her world.”

I personally read stories for the characters. I want to love the characters. I want them to make me laugh and cry and root for them despite their flaws. Learning how to convey what is in my head and heart as I write has taken time, practice, and many, many drafts, but I strive to make readers feel the same way about my characters as I do.

In my most recent publication, Prom for One, showcasing the main characters has to come quickly because the genre is a contemporary short story. In 40 pages there isn’t time to delve too deeply into descriptions as the plot must move along at a fast pace. I started with an idea in my head of how Lexie, the 17-year-old protagonist, felt. Through the plot I tried to show her vulnerabilities about her body image, her fear over her dad being in Afghanistan, and her longing to land the perfect date for her senior prom, the boy who already has the perfect girlfriend.

If a character can’t leave your mind after you’ve read a short story or novel, the author has done something right. That is my goal as an author.

Breaking Through: The Path to the Sun

A huge congratulations to Kimberli Bindschatel for making it to the quarter finals of Amazon’s Breakthrough Novel Award (Young Adult Fiction). Check out her entry here.

I first met Kimberli while writing for her Whisper in the Woods, a northern Michigan nature journal packed with gorgeous photography. Along with publishing and editing, she is also a talented photographer. And now she can add writing to the list of her many accomplishments. 

Best of luck to Kimberli and all debut authors!

From Damselflies to Literary Innovations

My story, A Damselfly in Distress, has found a home in Knowonder’s Nerissa’s Celebration, a collection of 30 read aloud stories for kids. It’s part of the Story-a-Day Initiative: “a Literacy Program that drives progress through fun, compelling and affordable stories each and every day of the month.” Let’s get everyone reading!

And check out the Year’s Coolest Literary Magazine Innovations.

What would Gutenberg think?

Roadside Distractions: Good News and a Moral

I’m taking a break from my literary journey to share a smattering of good news and a moral of sorts.

First the good news:

I recently discovered that Pine Manor College in Chestnut Hill, MA chose my short story, The Quincienera Text, to be part of their Women of Promise Scholarship:

“Each student read a beautiful story – The Quinceañera Text, by Erin Fanning – with a cross-generational theme that resounded with the students own experiences. When they arrived at Pine Manor each student wrote an essay on the story and later participated in a seminar-style discussion with their peers and a member of the faculty.”

I felt as if I’d won a contest I hadn’t been aware of entering. And I learned that touching someone with my writing was the ultimate reward for taking pen to paper (or, rather, fingers to keyboard).

I was equally honored to be profiled in the October issue of Toledo Reads. Sharon Arquette, the writer, told me she had been looking for an author with an eclectic career, someone who pursued a variety of literary avenues. She came across my website and was intrigued by my publication history. What I viewed as a scattered, unfocussed writing “career”—calling it that is a bit of a stretch—she found interesting (and, although flattering, the profile exaggerates my accomplishments a bit).

Which leads to my moral:

Enter contests, answer calls for submissions, promote your writing, and, most of all, learn the ins and outs of patience and perseverance. I could go on and on with numerous cliches and tired advice that you’ve head a million times but I think you get the idea: if you give up, you’ll never discover where all those hours of translating your imagination into words might lead you. You, along with your readers, could end up in a pretty spectacular place, where storytelling meets inspiration and promise.

I better wrap this up. My snake-wrangling buddies, Mano and Rafael, are honking the horn of their rusty F-250. They’re ready to hit the road and neither one of them is exactly known for patience—it’s the beginning of another literary adventure.

Happy holidays and see you in 2013!

Literary Journeys: Snake-wrangling, witches, and Jane Austen

Word Crushes is going on hiatus while I take a literary journey.

First stop is southern Arizona, where two snake-wrangling buddies are in desperate need of guidance. Then it’s off to Oaxaca, Mexico to research rumors involving a band of knitting-needle-wielding witches (try to say that three times fast). And finally I’ll head north to Idaho to help a heart-broken cowboy who is seeking solace in Jane Austen novels (I doubt I’ll be able to offer any better advice: Austen has been known to cure many broken hearts).

As you can see, it’s going to be a busy spring and summer–no time for blogging. I do hope, though, that the travels will help me refocus and come back with a new and improved Word Crushes, perhaps integrating the blog with my website. But all that will have to wait…

For now, bon voyage–happy reading and writing!

A little off topic… Adams Media Romance call for submissions

Adams Media Romance Guidelines —  “Our new direct-to-ebook romance imprint is launching soon! We’re open to romance submissions in five popular subgenres: romantic suspense, contemporary, paranormal, historical, and erotic romance. Within those subgenres, we are flexible about what happens. It’s romance, so there must be a happily-ever-after, but we’re open to how your characters get there. You won’t come up against preconceived ideas about what can or can’t happen in romance or what kind of characters you can or can’t have. “

March into Markets: Audio Magazine, Down-Under Literary, and more

Cast of Wonders: The YA Sci-fi & Fantasy Audio Magazine — “Cast of Wonders is a YA Sci-Fi & Fantasy fiction podcast, but we don’t rigidly define the genre. We’re looking for stories that evoke a sense of wonder, that have something unreal about them. We aim for a 12-17 age range: that means sophisticated, non-condescending stories with wide appeal, and without explicit sex, violence or strong language. Think Harry Potter or The Hunger Games.”

The School Magazine — “What is The School Magazine? It is Australia’s most loved and longest-running literary magazine for children. For generations, it has been introducing young readers to a world of words.”

Kindle Singles program sells over 2 million short stories — “Last year, Amazon began offering its affordable, bite-sized Kindle Singles for sale. Kindle Singles have a length that’s smaller than books, but longer than most magazine articles — essentially, short stories. But until now, no data existed on exactly how well these Singles are selling. “

Five hundred new fairytales discovered in Germany — “Collection of fairytales gathered by historian Franz Xaver von Schönwerth had been locked away in an archive in Regensburg for over 150 years.”

Spring Cleaning: New YA market and voice for kids

A recent spring-cleaning session unearthed the following sites:

Sucker Literary Magazine — “I am a rare specimen–an (online/electronic) literary magazine dedicated to showcasing and promoting undiscovered and established writers who write for young adults…. I am open to any and all writers at any and all stages  of their writing career/ journey into the publishing world.”

K.I.D. VOICE —  “K.I.D (Keeping it Diverse) VOICE is an online newspaper, launching in May 2012, that will feature submissions written for and by kids like you, of diverse age, gender and nationality.   Our goal is to open up the world of literacy and learning by keeping it engaging and diverse.”

Pure Escape: Skiing, Sun, and Beyond Centauri

The daily ski report told of fast turns and corduroy slopes. The sun clawed through a carpet of fog, melting away clouds and revealing an endless blue sky. In a word: perfection–a day made for escape, for forgetting about deadlines and worries.

A stop at the post office confirmed the day’s promise: the winter edition of Beyond Centauri–packed with sci fi and fantasy stories (along with my contribution, Stinky Feet For Dinner)–waited for me. My escape was complete.

Literary Love: A winner

Congratulations to Jesse for winning the I Heart YA Giveaway Hop–she’s now the proud owner of a short-fiction sampler jammed with hours of wonderful stories to read. You can find Jesse’s own short fiction at her blog, Jester Queen, and while you’re cruising the web check out the following blogs for more stories to read and insights into the writing world:  Best Blogs for Writers to Read in 2012  and StoryDam: “Everyone has a story… what’s holding yours back?” .